Friday, August 14, 2009

My Poem


I wrote this poem by myself. If you remember, Mr.Fon did a great job in his poem so I imitated his way..hehehe...

The sun is so shine and the sky is so bright.
There’s a little child who laughs and smiles until night.
People are calm and cool, they respect to each right.
They live in unity, no enemy no opposite side.

But today the sky and people’s mind is so dim.
Some girl cry and some guy scream.
They seem to hate each other since they separated their color.
Why do they need to suffer for the swindler or someone who did wrong?

People are infatuated in money and honor.
They compete to each other for acquirement.
They don’t know what the highest value is.
They leave an evil come across their heart.

People know what is right what is wrong.
But some people are not strong enough to judge.
Many want to be better than others.
This passion leads their behaviors to be corrupt.

The reason why our place is getting bad,
is mostly because people are mad.
Please stop for a while to recognize.
If this world is broken how come we survive?

We still have a chance to stop that phenomenon.
Let’s heal our world by living with wisdom.
It’s not too late to stop to bully.
Again our sun will become shiny, and evermore.


Let practice if you have a time. It’s a kind of free writing that you can write everything you want. You don’t need to think much about grammar but rhyme. It’s fun and relaxed a lot na ja….

Khun Mae N’Bonus

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